Well - I'm going to share personal comments right now as its hard to know what to say when the lionheads are overseas.
While I might not show Raylann at some of the bigger shows - I might show her in the smaller ones where she might place better. I say that because the rabbits on the East Coast here (which I think tend to win more and have a different look to them) - have a more rounded head than she does. But the fact is - there's something about the look in her eye - that I like her face. In addition - the mane on top of her head comes up and gives her ears more of a balanced look. I've had rabbits that had ears the same length - but the mane on one makes her ears appear shorter while the other rabbit might not have as much top mane and so the ears look like they're rabbit ears on top of a tv - standing straight up. Its amazing how much the top mane can make a difference in her look.
I also like the length of her mane in the front....nice body to it. She reminds me of my Isenstar who has probably one of the nicest manes as an adult that I've seen in my own herd and in some others too.
I wish I could see her whole body to see if she is teddy-like on the back (with lots and lots of fur - almost like an angora) or if she has a nice coat that just stays down. Some lionheads look like puffballs forever (the teddy look) and that doesn't do well in the shows.
About Benny - oh so cute for breeding purposes...if he is a Charley (charlie? I'm never sure how to spell it). The thing is - look at Raylann's picture and then look immediately at Benny's picture. See how his ears look bigger/taller? I bet if you measure their ears - they might be close to the same length but his show more because he has less mane on the top of his head.
Back to Benny if you were to breed...which I know you've said you're not going to do. The thing about him is - he would give you 100% broken litters. If you bred him to a typey doe...and got a nice buck out of it - then I'd replace him with his son...but because he carries the broken gene (and I LOVE brokens) - I would probably be willing to start a breeding program with him even though he isn't the best.
To give you a good critique of them both - it helps if we can see a side profile of them....
Here are some examples of the types of poses that help (and that breeders will use when advertising bunnies)..you can click on them to see the picture better.