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TinysMom

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A Christian writing list that I'm on has an annual scholarship (this is the 2nd year) to the Mount Herman Christian Writer's Conference in California every spring. The scholarship is worth $625 and includes the training, the food and the economy class room. I would only have to pay my transportation there and back.

The deadline is tomorrow - I've known about it since Sept. 6th but was so discouraged about my writing - I have been ignoring it. However, while Art & I were driving around today to do my mystery shops - he talked me into trying for the scholarship. So - I'm about to write my entry and try.

For those who believe in prayer - it would be appreciated. You can also send good thoughts and wishes, light candles, cross fingers and toes - or braid your bunny's hair in attempts to help me along.

I'll share my submission here once it is done.

Peg
 
I'm not sure that my two will appreciate their hair being braided:shock:, but I certainly hope that you get that scholarship:biggrin2:. You deserve it!

:pray::clover::pray:
 
Ok - here it is - I'm giving it a couple of hours to settle in my mind in case I need to make any last minute changes.

WARNING UP FRONT: I am a conservative Christian and this is a Christian writing conference. The sponsor of the scholarship writes both Christian and non-Christian books - but the list I'm on is for Christian writers. So I put some of my beliefs into the essay for them to connect with..

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I believe the Mount Hermon Conference is perfect for me at this time in my writing. Last fall I participated in NaNoWriMo and completed a 55,000 word manuscript during the month of November. I have continued to work on this novel and outlines for six sequels featuring several of the characters from this book. Participating in NaNoWriMo gave me the courage to tackle a novel I’d considered for years…a mystery shopper who falls in love with someone she mystery shops. While God helped me work on that story though, He enlarged my dream.

My dream is no longer limited to one book. It is a series. I want to write fiction to entertain readers and yet challenge them to also think about life and how they could live it. I want to give them courage to make changes in their life. I want to empower them accept their dreams (as I have) and step out in faith to make a new life for themselves. I also want to help them deal with their flaws and their pain and work through those things to become better people. I want to show them all this by helping them connect with someone who is as real and as flawed as they are. But my tools for this are the people in my novels and I know they need help.

My characters are real to me. In Portrait of Love, I understand Kate’s struggle to let go of her guilt over not being there when her grandmother was ill. She has never redecorated the house and feels like she is honoring her grandmother’s memory by living in a mausoleum. My heart goes out to Stan as he struggles to manage a store when he really wants to paint. He falsely believes he must work in a “traditional” career in order to be successful. The only problem is, his idea of success comes from his dead father, who he will never be able to please. Kate’s career as a mystery shopper can help her encourage Stan see that “nontraditional” careers can be ok. In spite of Stan’s ties to the past, he challenges Kate to see she’s living a life that isn’t true to herself.

Unfortunately, my characters are real only to me. I need help bringing them to life for my readers. If I don’t do this, my readers will not be enlightened and they might not even be entertained.. This is my biggest obstacle in the series so far.

I know that Lauraine Snelling’s workshop series on “Great Characters! The Foundation to Good Fiction” will bring my characters to life. I can even apply the lessons to the two rabbits and puppy that provide comic relief.

Without your help, I will be unable to attend the 2008 conference. If I am selected, I will make the most of every opportunity at this conference, including the night owl sessions. I can afford the travel expenses for the trip.

*NaNoWriMo – National Novel Writing Month – www.nanowrimo.org

 
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If it was up to me you'd certainly get it! :biggrin2:

Good letter!

(But am I the only one who didn't have a clue what a mystery shopper was until Peg explained it?)

Best of luck! Prayers, vibes, the works! :pray: :goodluck :clover:

s :hug1
 
Excellent letter, Peg. If I were the one selecting people, you'd have it in a heartbeat. :hug1

(caution: thread hijack in progress)

If this is the Mount Herman I'm thinking of, that place is really beautiful. Up in the Santa Cruz mountains, big redwoods everywhere. I've never actually been there, but I've gone by it alot. It looks like a peaceful place.

(thread hijacking is now complete)
 
Well - I just hit "send". Here's the final essay I came up with .... I was limited to 500 words and I hit it right on the dot. Last year the deadline was also on October 1st and they announced the winners to the list on October 11th. I'm hoping I'll hear good news before then (I understand they did contact the winners before the announcement).

And yes Greta - it is the same Mount Hermon area you're thinking of. Here's a link to the information about the writer's conference:

http://www.mounthermon.org/writers/index.php

Debbie Macomber is one of the two highlight speakers. Jerry Jenkins (the Left Behind series) is the other one.

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I believe the Mount Hermon Conference is perfect for me at this time in my writing. Last fall I participated in *NaNoWriMo and completed a 55,000 word manuscript during November. I have continued working on this novel and the outlines for six sequels. Participating in *NaNoWriMo gave me the courage to tackle a novel I’d considered for years…a mystery shopper who falls in love with someone she shops. While God helped me write that story, He enlarged my dream.

But my dream is no longer limited to this one book. It is now a series. I want to write fiction that entertains readers but also challenges them to think about life and how they could live it. I want to give readers courage to make changes in their life. I want to empower them accept their dreams (as I have) and step out in faith to make a new life for themselves. I also want to help them deal with their flaws and their pain and work through those things to become better people. I want to show them all this by helping them connect with characters who are as real and as flawed as they are. But my tools for this are the people in my novels and I know I need help with them.

My characters are real to me. In Portrait of Love, I understand Kate’s struggle to let go of her guilt over not being there when her grandmother was ill. She has never redecorated the house and believes she is honoring her grandmother’s memory by living in a mausoleum. My heart goes out to Stan as he struggles to manage a store when he really wants to paint. He falsely believes he must work in a “traditional” career in order to be successful. The only problem is, his idea of success comes from his dead father, who he will never be able to please. Kate’s career as a mystery shopper can help her encourage Stan see that “nontraditional” careers can be ok. In spite of Stan’s ties to the past, he challenges Kate to see she’s living a life that isn’t true to herself.

Unfortunately, my characters are real only to me. I need help bringing them to life for my readers. If I don’t do this, my readers will not be enlightened and they might not even be entertained. This is my biggest obstacle in the series so far.

Lauraine Snelling’s workshop series on “Great Characters! The Foundation to Good Fiction” will bring my characters to life. The description says that you put what you learn to use immediately. I need that help with both Portrait of Love and the rest of the series. In fact, I can even apply these tips to the two rabbits and puppy that provide comic relief. (Peg's note here - you have no idea how hard it was to NOT use at least 100 or so of my 500 words to talk about Miss Bea and Tiny and even Belle, the puppy. Oooh - I wanted so much to launch into bunny talk here - but I was good and resisted...I didn't even have enough words to say one rabbit was about 15 pounds! I thought that would have their interest...).

If I am selected, I will make the most of every opportunity at this conference, including the afternoon and night owl sessions and the manuscript critiques.

*NaNoWriMo – National Novel Writing Month – www.nanowrimo.org




 




I LOVE THIS! I may just make this my desktop picture till I hear back one way or another on the scholarship.....Certainly it couldn't hurt....

Thanks so much - this is just too much!!!!

Peg

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